Hey :D I'm italian, I'm writing a topic for Trinity College, is it right?

this is how it should be: In 2007 I started to play the piano. I was only ten, but my grandma has a piano and I wanted to try to play it. I was looking for a good teacher when my dad has an accident with a woman, Daniela, and he discovered that she’s a piano teacher. My first lesson was on October 3rd: I bought some sheets with musicale scales and easy melodies, but I even didn’t know the names of the notes’! My first year of lessons has been terrific: at the wise. I’ve played all of my songs from memory. In September 2008 I played for a committee of the Venice’s Conservatory and I took 8: I was allowed! In my piano’s cl there was a girl, Angelica, and we hated each other. Now we’re best friends! I wasn’t at the annual wise because I was ill, but in July I participated to a competition. I haven’t won any awards because I’ve arrived fifth, but I’ve amused a lot.